Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 699,603 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Seize The Opportubit - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Tomorrow shall never come
Plan for today and welcome
Start with good initiative
Remain purely purposeful and selective

Whole year has gone by
No purpose is served despite good try
New Year’s resolution may find some place
As outside competition is tough in any case

We try to escape by saying few words
Never learn from past mistakes and look forward
Temporary set back takes over full control
Mind is not allowed to set firmly for future call

It is alright when someone says “human is to err’
It is also alright if someone is not ready to face with fear
It shall not favor until executed with firmness
The struggle should be reflected on the face

Despite hard work, if it fails to deliver
Think about many attempts that has met with failure
It should never discourage you
The time is yet to come to prove

The life is marred by uncertainty
After repeated failure we turn to divinity
Pray the god for immediate success
With caring for available access

It is essential to seize the opportunity
Even though it may not be in conformity
With your thinking or ideals
But it is right choice to try as real


Comments about Seize The Opportubit by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/6/2014 8:07:00 PM)

    Gibz Rising likes this.

    Hasmukh Mehta welcome
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/6/2014 7:22:00 PM)

    this poem says to me, , that we dont take lufe seriously enough, we look past problems instead of work them out.. We are narrow minded when going through this journey called life..We should open our minds to whats going on around us.


    Brittany Pretlow10 minutes ago
    this is a very deep and real poem, it can speak to so many people and help them better themselves and their way of thinking.. you have a true talent
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/6/2014 7:10:00 PM)

    Reflective

    Kris Anderson8 minutes ago
    Reflective, good layout.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/6/2014 7:10:00 PM)

    Think about many attempts that has met with failure


    Edward Wahbe7 minutes ago
    It is essential to seize the opportunity SOUNDS LIKE A WISE MAN PREACHING, GETS BORING
    Even though it may not be in conformity
    With your thinking or ideals

    But it is right choice to try as real
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/6/2014 7:08:00 PM)

    Wow

    Mary Gordon8 minutes ago
    Real, Really Real
    Comment +1
    needs improvement
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/6/2014 7:07:00 PM)

    colm oconnor9 minutes ago
    Lacked a concise structure
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/6/2014 6:46:00 PM)

    Tomorrow shall never come
    Plan for today and welcome
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Poem Submitted: Monday, January 6, 2014

Poem Edited: Tuesday, January 7, 2014


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