M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 166,172 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

Senry - Eternal Place... - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Hiding in my heart
I desire to take your love
to eternal place.

Topic(s) of this poem: love

Form: Senryu

Comments about Senry - Eternal Place... by M. Asim Nehal

  • (9/16/2015 11:54:00 AM)

    Stealing is permissible in LOVE.........Wonderful haiku. (Report) Reply

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  • Sanjukta Nag (9/15/2015 11:35:00 PM)

    What an idealism. Beautiful....10 (Report) Reply

  • Gajanan Mishra (9/15/2015 9:40:00 PM)

    love and eternal peace - the same for life.. (Report) Reply

  • Rajnish Manga (9/15/2015 9:33:00 PM)

    Through this small poem you have beautifully tried to transport the love for your muse to sublime heights so as to feel the real bliss. Nice one. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, September 15, 2015

Poem Edited: Saturday, May 14, 2016

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