Wednesday, July 29, 2009

Senryu - A Few More Comments

Rating: 5.0
Gold fish swim around
the glass fish tank peacefully
teasing greedy cats


Sandra Martyres
Ted M 11 August 2009
A bouquet of red roses for his special young lady instead of a ring ******** Do we see a Journalist here. On target as usual. Nice write.............
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Jasmin Whyte 05 August 2009
3 different scenarios each played out to perfection! Thank you.
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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 04 August 2009
Beautiful senryu, Sandra. An enjoyable read indeed. Best Wishes Naseer
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Sarwar Chowdhury 31 July 2009
great indeed! penned beautifully! 10+
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These are all delightful and clever too Sandra. I thought the bouquet of roses a little sad, the fish very naughty teasing and the cloud seed extremely original. 10 Karin Anderson
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Carl Harris 30 July 2009
These are three very wonderful and beauifully expressed senryu poems, Sandra, each speaking on a different subject very well. Carl.
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lovely sandra...sad for the cat...less valuable seed...wonderful..never thought of it
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Carol Gall 30 July 2009
lovely sandra great senryu
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Beautiful, pleasant and humorous.10
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