WES Vogler

Gold Star - 80,275 Points (May 3 1930 / Vancouver BC Canada)

(senryu) Sign Of A Good Man - Poem by WES Vogler

Sign of a good man
Preacher no lies burial
And so down to earth

Topic(s) of this poem: death, religion

Form: Sapphic

Comments about (senryu) Sign Of A Good Man by WES Vogler

  • Kim Barney (12/4/2016 8:56:00 PM)

    Loved the line 'down to earth'. Don't you mean 'down in the earth'? :) (Report) Reply

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  • Valsa George (1/22/2016 5:04:00 AM)

    During the funeral oration, if the preacher is not forced to tell lies, the deceased one is a man/ woman of impeccable character! Great Senryu! (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (1/22/2016)

    If the truth is a good eulogy, the man must have been good (Report) Reply

    Wes Vogler Wes Vogler (1/22/2016 12:48:00 AM)

    thank you got it first time... clever dog

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, January 21, 2016

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