Friday, January 3, 2003

Sestina Comments

Rating: 3.9

September rain falls on the house.
In the failing light, the old grandmother
sits in the kitchen with the child
beside the Little Marvel Stove,

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COMMENTS
Yup 06 December 2021

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John Mahon 14 October 2021

Razors da left

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Dr Antony Theodore 29 November 2020

Time to plant tears, says the almanac. The grandmother sings to the marvelous stove and the child draws another inscrutable house. very fine poem. tony

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yumyum 18 November 2020

This is good I just cant do this i am just going to use this as something to learn from and right my own with

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Some rando nerd 04 April 2019

Yo That’s weird (I had to enter 20 characters so I’m just doin this lol)

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Bill Grace 25 November 2018

I return to this poem again and again and love it and do not know why.

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Harold 06 April 2018

I'm really into this poem. You can only respect Bishop's ability to manipulate words.

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Sad emo 10 September 2021

My bf manipulated me

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manweed42069 06 April 2018

love reading this poem while im smoking a fat blunt....a big sexy

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writer poet 12 February 2018

Bishop is overrated. this page tells me to write at least 20 words. as if that is the minimum for thought.

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blake 05 February 2018

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nicky 05 December 2017

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J.b. Lebuert 28 February 2012

If people only understood the challenges and difficulty of writing a sestina poem then the rating for this great poem would be higher. It is one of the ost difficult structured poems that I have ever attempted.

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ilia Altshuler 07 February 2012

I think: That the repeating pattern of the words: almanac, stove, house, child, tears, grandmother, suggest that the grand mother and the child are left alone, trapped in a continuous vicious annual circle. the tears suggest the tragic absence of the parents and the grandfather and perhaps the coming death of the grandmother. The last three lines which end with almanac, stove, house, suggest that the only thing that will survive is the house the almanac and the stove - the tears here are symbolical and stand for the more general mourn about the human mortality,

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anonymus 05 May 2020

thanks for ur answer u just saved my like 15 mins of writing

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Anessa Buff 12 January 2012

It appears to me that the man in the boy's drawing is the grandfather. Since the grandfather does not have a role in the poem, one can assume that the grandfather has passed away. So as to avoid any feelings of pain, the grandmother busies herself about the stove. The poem even states that the laughing and talking have the purpose of hiding the grandmother's tears.

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Wassaap 06 December 2021

Yup

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Oliver Hansen 22 December 2011

Hello Christina, well it has been nearly four years since your post, but I have an English final soon, and this topic is on the final so I thought I would try my hand at explaining. A sestina (or a sestine, sextine, or sextain) is a seven stanza poem, as you may have noticed. The first six stanzas consist of six lines and the last one of three, called an 'envoi.' Something I find really interesting about them is way the last word of each line repeats itself: 'house, tears, child, almanac, stove, and grandmother.' This pattern is traditional in sestinas. I feel this poem is about a loving household, where the grandmother cares for the child. They have a good time together and it is mixed with sadness from the grandmother. Maybe it's her mortality or the child's innocence she cries at.

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Christina Parker 28 March 2008

I like the poem, can someone explain it better to me though.

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