jodi right

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Seven Whispers - Poem by jodi right

Seven Whispers pass me by.
Unknowing, unrevealing,
The secret, which lies in the whisper of the mind.
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Comments about Seven Whispers by jodi right

  • (4/8/2005 9:42:00 AM)

    wow....you've really gone and done it this time.... (Report)Reply

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  • (4/5/2005 8:23:00 AM)

    Wow, Jodi. What a vision. I read this first because you said it was your first poem, and I'm amazed. You certainly have a gift. (Report)Reply

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  • (3/31/2005 12:25:00 PM)

    I will never look at poetry the same again. You should teach poetry, later. (Report)Reply

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  • (3/31/2005 9:03:00 AM)

    A beautiful poem, very classical loved it (Report)Reply

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  • (3/31/2005 3:48:00 AM)

    Very sincere and refreshing. Perhaps it could be advantageously shortened a bit and there are one or two lines that could be tidied up, but that is nit-picking; on the whole it is a lovely poem (Report)Reply

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  • (3/30/2005 2:27:00 PM)

    fess up...you're actually 80 reflecting on all your hopes, dreams, and life experiences...i have to tell you this is my favorite so far and it's being placed in 'my favorite poems' section...the wonder of words is amazing to me (Report)Reply

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  • (3/28/2005 7:37:00 PM)

    this is definatlyr my favorite so far. well worded, good, flowing rhythms. best line i think was the beauty one. so pretty.. (Report)Reply

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