Timothy Weiermann

Rookie (Friday, August 13th,1993 / Tucson, Arizona)

Shattered - Poem by Timothy Weiermann

Shards of heart span the floor,
Scattered, carelessly lain
Splinters piercing from the door
They personalize my pain

Violent and harsh
Like a drought tears at the parched

I’d say my soul’s been torn in two
But my soul still lies with you

You’ll stay close, taunting to tease
Hoping to hear me plea

But a soulless body,
Absent of a heart
Can be cruel and haughty
After he’s been torn apart

I’d say my soul’s been shred through
But its remnants lie with you
And you’ll stay close, taunting to tease
Hoping to hear my pleas
You’ll hope to hear my pleas

Shards of heart span the floor,
Scattered, carelessly lain
Splinters piercing from the door
They personalize my pain


Comments about Shattered by Timothy Weiermann

  • (3/12/2009 3:30:00 PM)

    I agree with Sally. You express yourself well. Write more. (Report)Reply

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  • (3/10/2009 4:44:00 AM)

    Emotional upset, sets in motions juices flowing toward creativity. Great artist talk of it. You found inspiration, to express your sorrows. It's good to let the hurt out, it helps the inside. (Report)Reply

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  • (3/10/2009 1:59:00 AM)

    Awh sooooooo sweet and poignant
    my lil fren in deep pain again
    chuck her out of your system
    shes not worth your love
    I know what an angel you are
    you are young ---dont you worry
    the pond is full of lovely fish
    -10 anjali
    lots of love dear Timo
    love you lots
    your best fren
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  • (3/9/2009 2:21:00 PM)

    i love this poem its beautiful you put your soul into it i know it great job (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, March 9, 2009



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