Friday, February 13, 2009

She Can’t See That Is Killing Me Comments

Rating: 5.0
No more love after her love
Now she is gone ….eternally
Her pride with her heresy
She can’t see, that is killing me


Yasser Koor
Marria Attar 14 February 2009
The words in your poem have so much meaning and the rhymes are very nice..10
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Vinod Kumar 14 February 2009
very much impressived lines actually to holding the total pain is a pleasure, she can`t see that is how vexatious, great write thanks,10++
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Catrina Heart 14 February 2009
Such a poignant poem woven with great poetic language...10
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sumaira 13 February 2009
so sad dear hope you get better one keep writing dear........
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ata khan 13 February 2009
Very sad, but nicely penned... Keep it up Yasser
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Eyan Desir 13 February 2009
hmmm, nice poem..............
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Little Hatila ;) 13 February 2009
This is very sad Yasser, but it is good to bring out and write down what you are feeling deep inside, it is the best of your work..... Good luck and God bless you....10 Hataw
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