Wednesday, April 7, 2010

‘she Looks Into Me…’ Comments

Rating: 3.1
She looks into me
The unknowing heart
To see if I love
She has confidence she forgets

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Paul Eluard
COMMENTS
Adeeb Alfateh 14 October 2019
Together inseparable Alive alive He alive she alive And my head rolls through her dreams. great great poem written great 10++
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Savita Tyagi 14 October 2019
Beautiful imagery. All we need to feel is the joy of being alive.
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Tamara Beryl Latham 14 October 2019
An excellent poem with an emphasis on feelings from the heart. Great images, however, the last line " detracts from the poem overall." Picturing a rolling head is way too vivid for my imagination. : -)
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Tamara Beryl Latham 14 October 2019
Great imagery in this poem that is illustrative of the author's love. The last line " And my head rolls through her dreams" is a bit confusing and detracts from the poem. Overall a great write. : -)
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Anil Kumar Panda 14 October 2019
Excellent poetry. Strong and powerful imagery. Like to read again and again. So nice.
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Uche Nwanze 14 October 2019
'Where are we together inseparable, Alive Alive: Poem is very creative and beautifully crafted.
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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 October 2019
Together inseparable Alive alive........here is the essence of the poem. A brilliant poem in brief by Paul Eluard is well executed.
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Mahtab Bangalee 14 October 2019
Together inseparable Alive alive He alive she alive/// beautiful expression on the love
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Aniruddha Pathak 14 October 2019
Falling asleep and dreaming in mutual closeness, as the poem goes its small length, the reader too tends to dream, half alive, half asleep, vaguely in dream.
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Dominic Windram 14 October 2019
Beautiful poem...expressing deep communion between lovers. Indeed, I would suggest that it exemplifies Martin Buber's notion of the I - Thou.
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Sandra Feldman 14 October 2019
A very wonderful love poem. Modernly, romantic! . Very impressive and well translated. So difficult to do!
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Sylvain 28 June 2019
Very Beautiful poem. 'My head rolls through her dreams" doesn't allude to guillotine or I don't know what. Some people will never be able to understand metaphors, poetry and surrealism.
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Susan Williams 14 October 2018
I just got censored! ! ! ! There is foul language all over the place in PH yet I get censored for making a reference to this sounding like an S @ M love poem. What? It was said with humor and it carried no lurid detail.... I don't believe this! ! I am going to make a copy of this.
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Susan Williams 14 October 2018
is there something wrong with saying that this could be a love poem from a to a? ? ? we shall see if those two words go through this time
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Susan Williams 14 October 2018
from a to a
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Susan Williams 14 October 2018
And my head rolls through her dreams. - - - I was dreaming along with this poem until this line which hopefully resulted from a faulty translation because all I visualized was the head rolling iff the guillotine.... yikes, ... not a good ending for a love poem unless it is from a to a i
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Marly Santos 14 October 2018
Very beautiful this poem Congratulations
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Marly Santos 14 October 2018
Very good this poem, congratulations!
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Edward Kofi Louis 14 October 2018
To see if i love her! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
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Pranab K Chakraborty 14 October 2018
Simply the essence of eternal love. Expressed through lucid words, exposed nicely her 'not ever died look'. Nice put.
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