Saturday, September 17, 2011

She Never Gives Any................ Comments

Rating: 4.4
She takes all the pain,
she never gives any,

She takes all the strain,

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I am not A POET
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Meena Mustafa 29 July 2012
Lovely :) such a sweet poem.
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Ahmed Abomahfouz 07 July 2012
beautiful poem..it is delicate to appreciate what she takes and what she gives
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Jasbir Chatterjee 01 July 2012
it's a good poem and you are a good poet...You leave behind statements and questions that just dangle...
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Valerie Dohren 30 June 2012
Short and simple, but with a great message - good one, and I think you are a poet! !
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Kaila George 26 June 2012
Your write like a true poet, I dare you to write more, please I would like to see more of your work, throws the gaunlet down, are you ready for the challange my friend.
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Vipins Puthooran 23 June 2012
Really good poem! ! ! !
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Neela Nath Das 21 June 2012
Simple but respect for her showered thru words.Wonderful.
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Soulful Heart 05 March 2012
is that ur mother? ...........................nicely put
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Ranis Thomas iii 02 February 2012
Very nice! Simple and straight to the point!
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Arathy Sj 10 November 2011
nice poem...it says a lot with a few words...lovely.. :)
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(De Va) 05 November 2011
nice write...I can feel your adoration in this work...thx for sharing...blessings....and keep up the good writing of your soul....
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Theany Ouy 29 October 2011
Beautifully written, I was zoned there for a moment because it was so pleasant to read. Thank you for sharing...
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Karima Astrid P 26 October 2011
Are you sure you are not a poet? Nice write you have in there. Simple but amazing :)
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Kee Thampi 26 October 2011
the white mellow She takes all the blame, But she never gives any,
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Marcus Mckinley 25 October 2011
reminds one of a mothers love, unconditional great job
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Dave Walker 18 September 2011
This is really good. Good write. May i invite you To read my poem called, boy to a man.
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Nanthinii Mohan 18 September 2011
great credit to the lady you love.....well written...loved it....... :)
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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 18 September 2011
simple and beautiful. who is this lady? mother, i suppose. pl. read some of mine and judge. shan
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Sajna Kailas 18 September 2011
you really rocked........... that is the skill given to women by god to take all the pains and give back love and care to their beloved ones with great patience and sincerety.you proved that you are a keen observer. i loved it. very nice. keep it up! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
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Renu Kakkar 17 September 2011
very nice...depicting womenhood but more would be mother
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