Friday, May 8, 2020

Showgirl Comments

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this death will be the life of me
patches in the sky
we used to call them clouds
before the bombs went off

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Clive Culverhouse
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Clive Culverhouse 20 June 2020
this poem of mine is also on Write Out Loud here's a comment from that poetry website about my poem Showgirl " I am a big fan... quite dark yet inspiring... disturb the beating of the heart.... keep writing."
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 08 May 2020
you slipped out of your negligee a little too easy tonight enjoyed
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glad you enjoyed my poem Showgirl, thanks for your time
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you slipped out of your negligee a little too easy tonight girls love it guys like you and us even oldies enjpy it like it wait for ittttttttttt good imagery poetttttttttttttttttt
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thanks for reading originally it was post war crisis but by calling it Showgirl and hinting her right at the end completely changed the poem and gave it the interest and boost I was looking for.
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Tom Allport 08 May 2020
Life must go on as well as the show? ....well penned
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absolutely … and primeval urge thanks for taking the time to comment
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