Sibling Sonnet Poem by emebet mesfin

Sibling Sonnet

Rating: 5.0


they are like twin only a year apart, at home at school inseparable, tenth birthday special in every respect, displayed difference is visible, prior to the day passed an ultimatum, no more fighting from now on, brother promised to abide by new form, queen determined nothing spoil her fun, best wishes flowed from every member, graceful girl radiated looking grand, he teased like before forgot reminder, disliking old habit her smile drained, it's not easy to get used to change, takes time to adjust in short range.

Thursday, July 5, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: birthday,changes,growing up
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Niece is becoming more feminine by the day. Gradually separating herself from her brothers.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 06 July 2018

It takes and takes time to adjust in short range due to change. An amazing poem is wisely penned...10

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Bernard F. Asuncion 06 July 2018

Emebet, such a lovely poem....10++++

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