Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 688,256 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Simple Note - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

It is long sight to use medium as wisdom
The "muse India "was used seldom
For comfortable position to comment
I find good wisdom for such improvement

What ails in such type of wisdom?
Will something come out from such freedom?
I comment for you and you comment for me
Who thinks and cares wisdom is free?

Wisdom lies in its formulation
Best use of intelligence in implementation
I find many poems are with "zero "indication
Does this mean our approach lacks wisdom?

Academicians need not prove as politician
Use it for self and erode the official position
Not in past I came across such open favoritism
It serves less and harms more for poems

Does everyone one care to look for poet's effort?
What he writes and what he tries to report?
I think my point shall be taken into account
As it is contrary to spirit and amounts breach

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Comments about Simple Note by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/29/2014 8:49:00 PM)

    The nice poem is tinged with too much soft sentiment......with all respect, I would differ....nobody is neglected here....it is nothing new....poems of many poets including this poet remained unread for days.....setting aside argument we better try to evoke the feeling of reciprocation.....thanks for this note...keep posting, dear poet.

    Partha Sarathi Paul, guskara-burdwan
    10/29/2014
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  • Soul Watcher (10/29/2014 8:16:00 AM)

    nice and so much fun to read......enjoyed this very much.... please read my poems and leave your opinion (Report)Reply

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/29/2014 7:50:00 AM)

    Ok Heather Coke2 hours ago Not my cup of tea, but I can see the work that was put into it.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/29/2014 7:49:00 AM)

    A vital point have you highlighted Many sure have been neglected You voice concerns of many Clearly you are not the enemy Hope words give path to actions Poetry should not depend on comments and appreciations

    Robin Singh, Mumbai
    10/28/2014
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/27/2014 7:07:00 AM)

    It is long sight to use medium as wisdom
    The “muse India “was used seldom
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Poem Submitted: Monday, October 27, 2014

Poem Edited: Monday, October 27, 2014


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