Sky And Stars Poem by sejal kapadia

Sky And Stars

Rating: 5.0


I looked at the sky and counted stars,
Some dryness in hair and fallen few,
Counted them and thought of remaining
Started to count but how to?
No answer, no theory, no reply,
All crazy thoughts but eagerness to know,
Well countless objects and lovely creations,
As I am on earth as lovely human being

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I looked at the sky and counted stars, Some dryness in hair and fallen few, ... pse let meknow whencounting is over.....well deserved 10.. read mine home bound, o.mother, papa do u know and papa u too

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Carol Gall 30 June 2009

a lovely poem counting stars 10

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Siddharth Singh 03 November 2009

This is a very sweet start for you on poem hunter. Keep going.

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 04 October 2009

MAY BE THEY ALSO LOOK AT US THIS WAY..A LOVELY SHORT POEM

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Surya . 30 July 2009

well beautiful poem, beautiful imagination.voted10 surya

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Sameer Ahmed 17 July 2009

Ralph Waldo says: ''If the stars should appear but one night every thousand years how man would marvel and stare''. If one is able to reach the skies and hold the stars then the whole of universe can be grabbed in palms which is what we call scientific exploration, yet, wer are humans on earth and nothing more and we lie pendent in the universe like a dot....10/10

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Hebert Logerie Sr. 15 July 2009

This is a good start, keep on writing!

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