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Sliced By Knife @! - Poem by .Pd. is here

proudly sitting
fear dosen't show
for fate that will follow
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Comments about Sliced By Knife @! by .Pd. is here

  • Jibin Joseph (1/31/2007 10:19:00 AM)

    i totally agree with jasjiv............ a clever one
    nice work my vote 10
    peace
    jibin
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  • (9/18/2006 5:51:00 AM)

    i loved the start, but then it changed in the end. a killer's mind would work the same way i thought. cleverly averted. (Report)Reply

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  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (9/1/2006 1:20:00 AM)

    AHHH...what a cleveruty of verse, young lady...You play the game so well....tease & please....nice work Preets! ''''''''''''''FJR (Report)Reply

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  • (8/24/2006 10:42:00 PM)

    I love this. It's perfectly everyday, turned into something special! (Report)Reply

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  • (8/22/2006 11:57:00 PM)

    the ending was good then i looked down
    and it got even better.

    enjoyed this
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  • (8/22/2006 2:25:00 PM)

    Once Eve had given the entire apple to Adam and see what had happened..... LOLz.....

    You are truly amazing and have a beautiful frame of mind. The simple things that you write on makes you a very special poet..... I had once said this earlier...You write like an angel!
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  • (8/20/2006 11:16:00 PM)

    i do...thanks...love...nalini...you forgot about the name on the ebook...LOL (Report)Reply

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