Thursday, March 1, 2007

Slipping Away Comments

Rating: 4.7

I’m Slipping Away
I might be gone today
But you are trying to save me
I’m glad for everything you gave me


Mona Willis
Kurt Rees 01 March 2007

i loved this one... i felt a few lines could have made this stand out, but overall a great piece of work

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Hey, that's a good poem, great work smiles n hugs Rissa: -)

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