Slumber Comments

Thanks for reading Nika- it turns out there were two errors in the poem both of which I have corrected. I must have been napping whilst submitting! I'd hoped the poem would capture some of that drifting feeling before sleep, and maybe it had a little influence on your nap needing mood

This is lovely, actually I really need a nap at the moment lol. But I have to point out, on the first line: A drowsy drop of the eyes, I think you meant to write droop Droop: verb 1. bend or hang downward limply. a long black cloak drooped from his shoulders synonyms: hang (down) , dangle, sag, flop