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Smoking! ! - Poem by lou lou

Smoking such a disgusting habit
Your hair smells your breath stinks but I want it why can’t I live without it
It seems that everyone around me is all jolly having a fag
When all I can think of is the 5 cream cakes to make up for it that I’ve had
I wish I never started what is the point
Well suppose its better then getting into the wrong crowd and end up smoking a joint
Just one fag that wont hurt that’s enough
But then nearly four weeks would have been wasted on one little puff
I love the way she blows smoke from one side of the room to the other
Anywhere else but around me the smoke seems to hover! ! !


Comments about Smoking! ! by lou lou

  • (8/14/2007 5:42:00 PM)

    LOL love it, smoking! cant live without it...erm oops! (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, August 9, 2007

Poem Edited: Sunday, March 27, 2011


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