Saturday, May 8, 2010

Smooth Like That Comments

Rating: 4.8

Electric urban night
En route to the site
Every detail just right
I'm smooth like that

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Yoni Assis
COMMENTS
Chinedu Dike 02 May 2018

Beautiful romantic piece of poetry embellished in poetic rhyme and rhythm. A lovely creation. Thanks for sharing Yoni and do remain enriched.

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Dr Antony Theodore 12 June 2017

Now’s my chance I pull her to dance She’s soon in a trance I’m smooth like that......very good......... the concept of sin after drinking...... and how you behave..... very nice poem dear poet. thank you. tony

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Goldy Locks 05 June 2010

You had fun writing this, and it shows! ! I love how it concludes with a lunch date the following day, as opposed to the expected one-night-stand. :)

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KYLEE BARTZ 11 May 2010

hehe.... nice..... seriously though, amazing poem. your a really great poet. 10!

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Trade Martin 08 May 2010

I enjoyed it buddy....., looks like you may know where it's at....! ! ! Regards, Trade Martin.

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