Snowing Seeds Poem by Glen Kappy

Snowing Seeds

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It's snowing seeds!

From all the elms
with graceful limbs
that arch above the park
the off-white
nearly weightless disks
begin their journeys
floating in the wind.

A huff—

and on the street ahead
some move in lines
like foamy surf
that nears a shore.

Some sweep around
and travel into driveways.

Some in circles spin.

And some—
amidst the sounds
of shaking leaves
and gathered chorus
of their ticking—
make wide arcs in phalanx
up the street—
against the wind and gravity! —
as if they had
a life their own—

and they do
it comes to me—
they really do.

Thursday, April 13, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: life,nature,seed,snow,spring,wind
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Adeeb Alfateh 01 August 2019

and on the street ahead some move in lines like foamy surf that nears a shore. Some sweep around and travel into driveways. great write 10++++++

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Glen Kappy 01 August 2019

Thanks, Adeeb! Of the longer poems (for me) that I’ve written in the last two years or so, this is one of my favorites. This was a wonder to witness. -Glen

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Suzanne Hayasaki 05 March 2018

A beautiful capture of the moment!

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Glen Kappy 06 March 2018

Thanks, Suzanne, for taking the time to find, read, and comment on this poem. This was one of those experiences that called to be described. -Glen

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Savita Tyagi 09 October 2017

Beautiful Nature poem. Cycle of life portrayed beautifully through the flowing seeds. I really liked the words 'weightless disks'. Thanks for letting me know about your thought provoking poems.

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Glen Kappy 09 October 2017

You're welcome. And thanks for reading and commenting. This was something to witness, and the words came quickly. -Glen

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Edmund Strolis 25 June 2017

The swirls and whirls of the world in motion. Nearly weightless discs reveal the invisible patterns of the day around us. A playful dervish while others line the street/shore until a vehicle or breeze whisks them madly on their way. For my own personal preference this is poetry at its finest. A casual conversation in the street due to obligation makes for difficult concentration when in our periphery nature is at play and the seeds gather, scatter and gather again............fantastic!

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Glen Kappy 25 June 2017

Wow! Thank you, Edmund, for the strong affirmation in your thoughtful response. Many have been the gifts- the observations, the ideas- that have from walking in area near my home. -Glen

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Tom Allport 30 April 2017

a good descriptive poem of goings on during a windy day when seeds of elms began to play? ............well written.

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Glen Kappy 30 April 2017

thanks, tom, for reading the poem and taking the time to comment. the best to you! -gk

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