Lyn Paul

Gold Star - 43,122 Points (17.03.1965 / Mt. Barker S.A)

So Many Questions - Poem by Lyn Paul

Can't you hold on while the trees grow?
Can't we together, watch the wind blow?
Can we not walk along the beach as we always did?
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Topic(s) of this poem: death


Comments about So Many Questions by Lyn Paul

  • Drtony Brahmin (12/7/2017 12:36:00 PM)

    Can I survive without you each day?
    Will this darkness ever... go away?

    but i shall go on because you gave me strength........ sweet memories of the one who was loved and gave love always remain in us and help us to move on........ such memories are the sweetest....... you have it and you are blessed to have it......... thank u for this fine poem, delicate poem of love. it speaks your mind full of love. tony
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  • Bri Edwards (7/29/2017 12:49:00 AM)

    damn this is good! i would use it in August showcase, but my other comment says i would use it in May.

    i guess i did; who can remember it all? !

    bri ;)
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  • Bri Edwards (4/23/2017 7:49:00 PM)

    yes, questions. will 'we' ever know the answers? doubt it.

    i liked the switch from 2 can'ts to 1 can we not.

    and from 5 wills to 1 shall and then back to a will.

    where there are 5 wills and a one shall, there SHALL be a way!

    bri :)

    to MyPoemList.

    and to my/our May showcase.

    bri :)
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  • Edward Kofi Louis (4/3/2016 2:31:00 PM)

    Will this darkness ever go away? ! ! Thanks for sharing. (Report)Reply

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  • (7/27/2015 3:26:00 PM)

    Wow! Such determination. A very touching piece, Lyn. Hope this one isn't from experience.
    'I will now remember you, watching from above'.
    I assume this is about a love that has passed on, all too quickly.
    A lovely poem, heartfelt.
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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (6/20/2015 5:53:00 PM)

    Can I survive without you each day?
    Will this darkness ever... go away?
    My life was so perfect... Yet now time is standing still
    Now I must go on... I CAN and I WILL! ..........philosophical write related to God through many questions. We can't survive without God. However the darkness is, it must go way. True and groovy imagination. Thanks for posting......10
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