Weeping Willow


Soft Pains - Poem by Weeping Willow

Soft pains
split my heart
Tears are all I know
Your voice echos through
the phone
Struggling to hold on
as I quiver to your tone
My heart bleeds
as I listen to your story
Always different each time
Filled with sadness of all the madness
entering your mind
I feel lost
My prayers seem unheard
Although I still believe
God has touched your life
with some kind of light
Though dim
He must be there within
your mind
My prayers are whispered
every night
That somehow your darkness
will become light
Soft pains split
my heart within the madness
that you breathe
I lay my heart at God's feet
Saying please heal my daughter
of this disease
For drugs have collapsed
her life
In front of me.

By Weeping willow
(c) 2015; \

Topic(s) of this poem: blues

Form: Blues Poem


Comments about Soft Pains by Weeping Willow

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/8/2015 9:20:00 PM)


    Tear talks about such soft pain that is filled with love and emotion. Filled with sadness and madness still life searches to get joy. Very amazing poem shared in this context....10 (Report) Reply

    Weeping Willow Weeping Willow (11/19/2015 11:22:00 PM)

    Thank you so much for reading my poem; }

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  • Souren Mondal (11/8/2015 9:19:00 PM)


    A very poignant 'prayer' poem... Thank you for sharing.... (Report) Reply

    Weeping Willow Weeping Willow (11/19/2015 11:22:00 PM)

    Thank you so much; }

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, November 8, 2015



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