Solitude Poem by Harjeev Sabherwal

Harjeev Do you like in your nighttmare itself? Dont you want awake? poem is nice, keep writing and sumbmit more. When time permits pls go thru my 'Smudge of Blood' Regards, Nooruddeen

You asked me to comment on your poem. Well, I think it is powerful and it flows well. I am not really a 'proper' poet, so I find it hard to say anything more constructive than that. Also it sounds as if you have had very personal experiences that I have not. It would be interesting to see some comments from people who have faced similar problems. Good luck in your future writing!

scream and struggle till the nightmare ends Only to wake up and see all those masked people around me...... good write andheart touching. first attempt is very good and I must grace it with 10 rad mine dead nights, you go alone and what I m doing on earth

fear filled piece.....to be alone......in a dungeon....tears and fear....good piece...describing the fear and chaos of the world of today.....good write :)

I love this, this reminds me of myself when i was age 6-9, i always felt lonely like i was cooped up in cage, this poem reminded me of that feeling.10/10.

Hi my new poet, this is your words. so you shouldn't tell all your emtion.make it a littel short.hope next time, to be more vivid and most light.good. write. S.E

Solitude rewards grieving heart with gratitude.

Oh no! That was a pleasant read, it didn't strike me until afterwards how long it was, which is good because I am a lazy reader, but you gripped my attention until the last.: -)

we may just be watching the birth ofaq great poet.. nice

There are some very vivid images and trouble emotions here. It is a compelling and powerful write - very promising if, as you say, this is the first poem you have ever written. Wishing you every success with your future pieces. S :)