Shahid Habib

Rookie - 75 Points (20/05/1996 / Hiller Shahabad Anantnag Jammu and Kashmir)

Someone Special - Poem by Shahid Habib

You make me laugh when I want to cry, Make me live when I want to die, Make me smile when I want to frown. Like a Pari you came in my life filled my heart with joy, Took my pain as if it was yours Provide me with love that no one could give me. You were my piller when I was falling, You were my strength when I was weak, Without you next to me my life is nothing. Everyday and everynight I sat and pray you will remain as sweet as you are, I will always love you as you let me

Form: Sonnet

Comments about Someone Special by Shahid Habib

  • Chinedu Dike (12/14/2015 7:25:00 PM)

    Lovely depiction of the essence of true love, nicely penned from inner recesses of the heart with conviction. Love is a spiritual experience that affects one profoundly - a voyage of bliss. Thanks for sharing Shahid. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON. (Report) Reply

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  • Akhtar Jawad (11/30/2015 4:21:00 AM)

    A beautiful poem by a boy who has just bid farewell to his teen age. I expect many more lovely poems like this. (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (11/23/2015 11:13:00 AM)

    Your first PH encounter was a good one with Souren. Enjoy your time here and keep writing, you have talent.
    Thanks for sharing, Shahid.
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  • Souren Mondal (11/23/2015 8:50:00 AM)

    A sonnet is usually of fourteen lines and is often written in iambic pentameter Shahid.. So, I am not sure your twelve lines' poem can be categorised as such.. Apart from that a really good write... Thanks for sharing and welcome to poemhunter...

    P: S: For the non-Indian readers, the word 'Pari' means 'a female Angel'...

    Cheers mate :)
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    Souren Mondal (11/23/2015 10:22:00 AM)

    Shahid, you don't have to adress me as 'sir', I am neither that old nor I have the merit to be called so.. Simply call me Souren.. And enjoy yourself here friend, you'll find many good member poets as well as greats.. Read, write, comment, and discuss - engage with people and you'll learn to become a better poet :)

    Take care buddy :)

    Shahid Habib (11/23/2015 9:26:00 AM)

    Thank you sir, as i am new on this site, do correct me, where ever you found me wrong.... Thankyou again sir for correcting me...

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Poem Submitted: Monday, November 23, 2015

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