Thursday, August 10, 2006

Sparks And The Signs…… Comments

Rating: 4.5

Two spirits two existences
What do they talk? And what did they see?
What did they feel? And what did they hide?
They talked of sparks and the signs on a clear night

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KUNAL SETH
COMMENTS
Nitya Pillai 21 January 2007

You write amazingly well...havnen't seen a submission for really long now...don't you think it's time for this year's editions to start trickling in? Watsay?

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Original Unknown Girl 13 September 2006

This is beautiful! I love the way it captures the reader and hooks them in..... right til the last line! Perfect!

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