Derek Karpinski

Stars Burst - Poem by Derek Karpinski

a starburst of love
encircles me
draws me in relentlessly

Two planets. Then.
don't collide
but achieve

a stable orbit
around each other
taking the best of both we

build from that.


if you can
if you will, Will the
deepest heart of union

we can do what we can will

Willingly we do (in glee and in strength)
and may our love
surpass all.

Comments about Stars Burst by Derek Karpinski

  • (6/22/2008 5:44:00 PM)

    Beautiful analogy of love and ideal relationships between people in love. Promising work.
    Looking forward to reading more from you Derek.
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, June 22, 2008

Poem Edited: Sunday, June 22, 2008

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