Kelly Kurt

Gold Star - 206,663 Points (1/14/1958 / Cedar Rapids Iowa)

Station (Tanka) - Poem by Kelly Kurt

Conscious, cerebral
Evolution’s archetype
Consummate life form
Walk the Earth as tho a god
In the midst of billions more

Topic(s) of this poem: equality, life

Form: Tanka

Comments about Station (Tanka) by Kelly Kurt

  • Brian Mayo (11/3/2015 8:05:00 PM)

    Interesting- -I'd feel a lot more god-like if there weren't so many of us. I vote we get it down to a reasonable number, asap. lol
    I like your poem, and you ended it superbly.
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    Kelly Kurt (11/3/2015 8:40:00 PM)

    Decrease the surplus population? : -) If we got the number down to where it felt special, there wouldn't be enough people left to do all the jobs that need to be done to support the infrastructure. lol

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  • Melvina Germain (11/3/2015 3:02:00 PM)

    Beautiful words, fabulous thought Kelly..... (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (11/3/2015 8:36:00 PM)

    Thank you, Melvina. Thoughts like this are beautiful no matter how articulated.

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/3/2015 9:16:00 AM)

    Gorgeous expression. Beautiful Tanka. Thanks for sharing. ...10 (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (11/3/2015 8:34:00 PM)

    Thanks, Kumarmani. After I had written this, I knew it was one of my better, recent works

  • Pamela Sinicrope (11/3/2015 8:13:00 AM)

    That's a beautiful poem. Your best Tanka that I've read. Saving it.... (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (11/3/2015 8:33:00 PM)

    Thank you, Pamela. I really like this form. Some people don't care for this or Haiku and prefer the graceful rhyming poem that is delightful to be spoken and heard.

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (11/3/2015 7:25:00 AM)

    One should carry self with confidence as if everything belongs and created by them...A unique message like Allama Iqbal...Khudi Believe in self.....Loved it. (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (11/3/2015 8:29:00 PM)

    As part of the most advanced species on the planet, we should all know how special that makes each of us

  • Seema Jayaraman (11/3/2015 5:56:00 AM)

    Walking Gods aren't we all, just one amongst a billion.. learning technicalities and spirit of Tanka from these wise cerebral outpourings. thanks. (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (11/3/2015 8:25:00 PM)

    Thank you, Seema. The switch at the end is what I like. In this case, the beginning builds us up as gods, the end tells us that we are all equal. One god should treat all others with peace and love

  • (11/3/2015 1:49:00 AM)

    everybody thinks he/she is somebody
    thanks Kelly-10
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    Kelly Kurt (11/3/2015 8:20:00 PM)

    We are special among all the life on Earth, gods in a way over all else, ans there are over seven billion of us

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, November 3, 2015

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