Monday, June 9, 2008

Stay Here With Me Comments

Rating: 2.7

I turned away for just a second
and you changed your mind
you said you'd be here always
But you decide to leave me now

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Chocolate Bunny
COMMENTS
Chantelle Nixon 07 November 2008

Wow, the structure of this poem is outstanding! Great job!

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Karen Wood 09 June 2008

I love poems that emit raw emotion, this does just that. Nice work!

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Serenity Prayer 09 June 2008

very sad, but very good. good job. keep it up.

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