Tuesday, February 23, 2016

Story Of A Drifting Log Comments

Rating: 4.7
Floating
Along the unpredictable current
No destination, near or far
Bobbing Up and down

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Nosheen Irfan
COMMENTS
Rose Marie Juan-austin 26 September 2019
What a beautiful poem. The superb imagery of this marvelous write made me experienced how to be hurled with demonic force of the water. A gripping story how life can be cruel at times. The closure line is thought provoking... Beautifully crafted and well executed write. Onto my Poem List.
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M Asim Nehal 27 February 2016
Life is unpredictable at times, it is out of control at times and it surprises you at times....Yet the beauty remains unfolded till the last breath.....The call is from our origin and it keeps calling all our us to return to the bases.
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Abderrahmane Dakir 24 February 2016
Gratitude practice is a way to live in love. Thank you for sharing.
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Valsa George 24 February 2016
In the current of life, sometimes we are like floating logs. Perhaps we might be drifted ashore by a benevolent fate. But before the next wave comes to hurl us once more into the roaring waters, we should wake up and be upon our heels! The unpredictability of life, man's helplessness and the whirls of fortune are beautifully presented through the metaphor of the log and the swirling currents! Loved reading this beautiful poem!
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Aarzoo Mehek 23 February 2016
That is life with all it's cruel traits and there is god with all it's compassion lifting us from the whirlpool of pain. Very beautiful poem depicting life's struggles.... Loved this poem with all it's roar.10+++
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