Mon Fur

Stuck In A Daydream - Poem by Mon Fur

He's standing there
playing with my hair
Laughing and smiling
read full text »

Comments about Stuck In A Daydream by Mon Fur

  • Lenny Camacho (9/24/2014 11:07:00 PM)

    Walter Mitty in girl version... lovely little poem... thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Terry Craddock (9/24/2014 7:34:00 PM)

    Loved the way this poem started with

    He's standing there
    playing with my hair
    Laughing and smiling

    and then I thought his handsome face so fair sounded kinda right before

    'I'll never choose another'
    He whispers, handing me flowers
    He leans in for a (stolen) kiss
    I'm weak for his power

    its just me the romantic, internalizing lines I loved written by another :) Loved the ending, I was stuck in daydream bliss, that caused me to wish lists... must be the flowers of spring :)
    (Report) Reply

  • Bernard Snyder (9/24/2014 11:21:00 AM)

    Impressive. Also, congrats on being voted 'Poem of the day'...Well-deserved. (Report) Reply

  • Elena Sandu (9/24/2013 8:02:00 PM)

    Aww! What a beautiful poem! What would we do without those moments of day dreaming, we could be stripped forever of the impulse of creativity. Thank you for sharing, loved with this poem! (Report) Reply

  • Jayne Davies (9/24/2013 1:10:00 PM)

    Great poem! Well done (Report) Reply

  • (9/24/2013 9:58:00 AM)

    Nice poem with true love! (Report) Reply

  • Krishnakumar Chandrasekar Nair (9/24/2013 9:33:00 AM)

    Life is too short to just day dream
    Find him and then gleefully scream
    Bedecked with flowers you so keenly yearn
    And brimming with love that brighter burns....

    (good work - keep writing)
    (Report) Reply

  • Jasbir Chatterjee (9/24/2013 6:20:00 AM)

    When you yearn for something so badly that you think of it all the time, you do get it for sure...I am sure one day your daydream would come true...wish you all the best (Report) Reply

  • (9/26/2012 8:47:00 PM)

    Wow! (Report) Reply

  • (9/25/2012 4:58:00 PM)

    this is a lovely poem. (Report) Reply

  • Marlene Rashidi (9/25/2012 2:44:00 PM)

    This poem slapped me cross the face. So Poetic! (Report) Reply

  • Sridatta Gupta (9/25/2012 4:08:00 AM)

    lovely.very has a fresh feeling (Report) Reply

  • (9/24/2012 10:02:00 PM)

    such a lovely poem filled my morning with that feeling of love overflowing in your poem.... (Report) Reply

  • Ruby Honeytip (9/24/2012 9:33:00 PM)

    This is a lovely poem! I loved it...sweet and full of imagery.

    It reminds me of a poem I wrote and I'd love to know what you think.
    It's called 'Like a Boss' I'm sorry if it seems a little rude.

    She wants to watch the base of his throat as he throws his head back to laugh
    She wants to smell the ocean through the pine trees and hear her own soft whimper as he bends to kiss her.
    She wants to feel him whisper sweet, crazy words close to her ear and delight in the hidden shivers he brings to the depths of her
    She wants to feel the heat from his hand burn her thigh
    She wants to pull his sweet breath into her chest and hold it until she knows it has travelled to the centre of her.
    She wants permission to stand close...very close
    Can he tell that his name starts deep inside her and rings and rings and rings? .......
    Then she opens her eyes and, ever ladylike, crosses her legs, hands folded over her knees, as the world comes back to focus
    She wonders if this too shall pass
    So she can get back to work!
    (Report) Reply

  • (9/24/2012 9:32:00 PM)

    Love this poem! I relate all too well! :) (Report) Reply

  • (9/24/2012 1:55:00 PM)

    I liked it very much :) (Report) Reply

  • Romeo Della Valle (7/4/2011 10:01:00 PM)

    I read this well penned and poignant poem and I can see clearly that you have what it takes to make it through the poetry world: TALENT. Keep inspiring the World! I am not going to invite you to read any poem of mine in particular but whenever time permits visit my page if you wish and enjoy it! For your excellent poem you deserve a 10+++ Love and Peace for always! ... (Report) Reply

  • (7/4/2011 9:15:00 PM)

    Wonderful poem written with great skill. The poem is rich in imagery and style. I am impressed. Well taken. I rated it 10.
    Please read and rate my poem 'Abortion' on page 4.
    Warmest regards
    (Report) Reply

[Report Error]