Arsiema Berhane

Such A Rush

It's mornin', I have to get up.
It's mornin', I hate to get up.
It's mornin', it's gonna be a busy day.
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  • Walterrean Salley (9/15/2012 6:03:00 AM)

    One's day can get so busy and become so hectic that it's hard to keep up with plans, much less the unexpected. Your poem really states the truth of the matter.

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  • Will Barber (10/17/2006 8:02:00 PM)

    A rush of a poem, indeed. I thoroughly enjoyed this. The words hurry us off to - reflection. - Will

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  • Scarborough Gypsy (2/8/2006 11:27:00 PM)

    This is coooool! I could here it being performed as a rap piece. Really like the way you switched scenes and then back in your cosy bed at the end.

    Love
    Gyp's

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  • Charles Chaim Wax (2/2/2006 7:59:00 AM)

    the universal task
    put bread on the table
    here given
    inner meaning
    the details so real and true
    a fine poem

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  • Peter A. Crowther (2/2/2006 6:43:00 AM)

    Good poem, Arsiema. The accumulation of short staccato phrases and sentences piled one upon the other perfectly convey that sense of breathless haste that accompanies the morning rush to work. Very well done.

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  • Konjit Berhane (2/2/2006 6:39:00 AM)

    great poem girl...but did i miss something here since when do u take the sub way... loll
    cool one

    **KoN! **

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