Tuesday, September 29, 2015

Summer Rain Summer Comments

Rating: 5.0

I am a comer new comer
You tell me tale summer.
Oh summer you tell me
Cheer in mind you see.


Kumarmani Mahakul
Dogma Daniman 11 October 2020

Summer rain gives a glimpse of joy with beauty of watching it. This poem is nice.

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Isabel Pimentel 10 October 2020

Sometimes during summer rain happens. We witness this truth. Rainbow forms getting summer light I have seen.

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Aniruddha Pathak 07 June 2019

Yes, summer is the season to ask for rainy season. It is hot summer that rains are good. The poem is written as if meant for children and as Akhtar Sahab said there is an element of music in it.

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Edward Kofi Louis 06 April 2016

In the warm. Thanks for sharing.

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Akhtar Jawad 12 October 2015

a beautiful poem with an element of music in it......................................10

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Valsa George 29 September 2015

Though there is scarcity of rain in summer, the occasional drizzles help the land cool down! Those little drops are like a shower of mercy from above and wipe away the pain! I feel the coolness of a drizzle!

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Kelly Kurt 29 September 2015

I enjoy your analogies, Kumarmani

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