Surreal Swallows Poem by daubmir nadir

Surreal Swallows

Rating: 3.6


Grip my hand, son
And kill all your obsessions

Take my arm, son
And destroy all your compulsions

Hold me close, son
And slay all your delusions

Tear my heart apart, son
And swallow all the love
It contains.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Will Barber 15 May 2006

Wow! I hadn't read this one yet - so raw, so ready for the palate. Short and full of intensity. Don't know how you managed to do so much is so few lines. I bow to you.

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Duncan Wyllie 06 May 2006

You really are brilliant you know, Love Duncan

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trisha evensen 06 May 2006

oh my goodness, this is one of the most beautiful sweet, lovely amazing.......wow

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