Sweet Friendship Poem by Prasanth kumar
Sweet Friendship
When the Silent darkness tightened the noose
The hope you shone saved me from non existence
When the frustration like a millstone dragged me to drown
The hand you extended served as a lifebuoy that kept me afloat
When the depression tides tried to battle me down
The support you gave, surfed me to safe shores
When I grieved for reasons unknown
Your smile was the only reassurance that changed my state
When the painful silences tried to burn my heart slowly
Your words of Love sprinkled happiness within me
For me, there is no me without you
Despair, frustration, depression, Unknown grief, silence
Now stand corrected by Hope, support, smiles, love and words that you gifted
Forever and ever, I with bold letters tattooed your name in the depths of my heart
As my soul saver and the sweetest friend ever
Like the bud growing tall,
let we buddies grow tall in our friendship, higher and stronger forever.............
Nice work with the muse of love and life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Nice work, but you should never use abbreviations in your poetry like you would in an instant message to someone. Line 8: YOUR smile instead of UR smile Line 13: YOU gifted instead of U gifted Lines 2,4,6,8,10 and others: There is no reason to EVER use two semicolons together!
Absolutely beautiful poem about friendship and what it truly means to be a friend to another person. Giving support and reassurance through the tough times, grief, depression, etc. Very well written with all the attributes of love sprinkled within. Loved this poem, thank you for inviting and sharing it with me. RoseAnn
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Read this poem again, just love how you describe friendship! Awesome! Put it on my favorite poem list and gave it a 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ Thank you once again! RoseAnn