Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

Rookie - 207 Points (Singapore)

*** Take Me With You *** - Poem by Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

Dusk chasing the lazy dawn
Sounds of angry skies deafening
Lightning, like a giant snapshot
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Comments about *** Take Me With You *** by Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

  • (12/18/2008 6:41:00 PM)

    Wow! Really good =) I like it. (Report) Reply

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  • (12/9/2008 3:58:00 AM)

    this is really nice...i love this poem...I REALLY LIKE THIS.. (Report) Reply

  • (12/3/2008 8:07:00 PM)

    'Is there any other love in you?
    Betrayal is the word for sinner
    Remember my promises?
    I will hang my neck to your flawless hair
    Decapitating my head for your moo
    Enhancing your voices to purer
    Disjointing my legs for I couldn’t run less
    Making us the most corrupted pair'

    This part really caught my attention. I loved every bit of the poem
    I'd rather be gone than live life without love.
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  • (11/30/2008 10:13:00 AM)

    you are no 1 sensei I not doubt! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • (11/30/2008 8:45:00 AM)

    ANOTHER GOOD ONE SULAIMAN FULL OF PASSION AND IMAGINATION.. GOOD LUCK (Report) Reply

  • (11/30/2008 2:39:00 AM)

    The Muse at its best (Report) Reply

  • (11/29/2008 8:59:00 PM)

    beautiful imaginitive poem loved it! 5 stars (Report) Reply

  • (11/29/2008 8:14:00 AM)

    I can feel you passion in this poem. The imagery is rolling of your tongue into your work.

    well done it is really hard to do that is writing
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  • (11/28/2008 3:55:00 AM)

    Wow! Very descriptive...I love the way you express ur desires. (Report) Reply

  • (11/28/2008 3:46:00 AM)

    it's so great. I 'm not online a lot because of my work so I didn't see it when added.
    I like all the images u put especially:
    The singing stars will guide us to eternity
    good luck
    thanks for informing me about ur new writings & take care
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  • (11/27/2008 7:55:00 PM)

    I love the way you blend love and disaster in this poem...almost as if they're one in the same. (Report) Reply

  • Mohammed Al-balushi (11/27/2008 3:49:00 PM)

    good one, keep writing lovely poem (Report) Reply

  • (11/27/2008 12:44:00 PM)

    Wow this is really good take a look at my first tell me what you think. (Report) Reply

  • (11/27/2008 9:41:00 AM)

    wow this is an amzing poem...read mines (Report) Reply

  • (11/27/2008 6:19:00 AM)

    Wow. An excellently written piece, very descriptive, nice word choice. (Report) Reply

  • Malini Kadir (11/27/2008 6:16:00 AM)

    God is it the most passionate of poems....your poetry takes me with you.... (Report) Reply

  • (11/26/2008 9:42:00 PM)

    A simply beautiful and inspirational piece, with depth and amazing insight (Report) Reply

  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (11/26/2008 8:07:00 PM)

    As if you needed a hundred and tenth comment&accolade, Sulaiman, right? ...LOL! Snapshots....pictorial freeze-frames for the minds-eye's banquet of focus and endulgence....as that's what came to MY mind...when first i bit into this brilliant slice of how imagery...commands, and delivers...Outsatanding Work! You 'da main PH man, my friend!

    FjR
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  • (11/26/2008 7:42:00 PM)

    OMG! ! ! I LOVE IT! ! THANKS FOR SHARING KEEP WRITTING YOU'RE AN EXCEPTIONAL POET. (Report) Reply

  • (11/26/2008 5:31:00 PM)

    Wow this is such a beautiful poem i feel the love u have (Report) Reply



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