Tuesday, December 31, 2002

Taking Leave Of A Friend Comments

Rating: 3.1
Blue mountains lie beyond the north wall;
Round the city's eastern side flows the white water.
Here we part, friend, once forever.
You go ten thousand miles, drifting away

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COMMENTS
Glen Kappy 07 November 2016
what stands out to me about this poem is how li po creates perspective. the first two lines help that referring to two directions. the ten thousand miles and the simile of unrooted water-grass create the picture of widening distance. the last four lines not only complete the picture- in which we now seem to see the friends riding in different directions from an aerial perspective- but also express a keen yearning. -glen kappy
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* Sunprincess * 12 September 2015
...so poignant...so beautiful ?
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