Alison Cassidy

Tantra

Like waves against the sand
Your breath ebbs and flows
Cool lips brushing the lids of my eyes
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  • K. V. VenkataramanaK. V. Venkataramana (3/29/2008 6:39:00 AM)

    I love reading your poems. The theme speaks of merger of two entities as if through 'yoga'.

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  • Duncan Wyllie (5/9/2007 1:04:00 PM)

    WOW! this is pulled together so well in the last few lines, a tallented lady indeed
    Flags up, holding a ten here
    Take care Alison
    Love duncan x

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  • Gregory Gunn (10/21/2006 3:14:00 PM)

    A ravishing and tantalising delight. Is there the low, lush violin strings being swept in the background....Vivaldi is it? Yes, plenty of rhythm, indeed, and well-balanced, too. Nice sensual presentation.

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  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjrFrank James Ryan Jr...fjr (8/26/2006 1:58:00 AM)

    TEMPTRESS MATERIAL SEEPING OUT BEHIND OUR INNOCENT BACKS, ALLIE...SHAME, SHAME! LOL! Very nicework eau amor, non? oui!
    ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''fjr

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  • Lesa K (7/27/2006 6:38:00 PM)

    Beautiful and sensuous.

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  • Dorothy Pugin (6/15/2006 3:07:00 PM)

    I liked the evocative rythym in this poem Alison. Could feel the waves.

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  • Jerry Hughes (6/14/2006 6:04:00 PM)

    I get the picture, and like it tres much...

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  • Neat Bender (6/14/2006 6:37:00 AM)

    I read through enjoying the steady rhythm and imagery and reach the end feeling seduced. I think you accomplished what you set out to do with this one. Great poem! ! !

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