Like waves against the sandYour breath ebbs and flowsCool lips brushing the lids of my eyes................................................
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I love reading your poems. The theme speaks of merger of two entities as if through 'yoga'.
WOW! this is pulled together so well in the last few lines, a tallented lady indeed
Flags up, holding a ten here
Take care Alison
Love duncan x
A ravishing and tantalising delight. Is there the low, lush violin strings being swept in the background....Vivaldi is it? Yes, plenty of rhythm, indeed, and well-balanced, too. Nice sensual presentation.
TEMPTRESS MATERIAL SEEPING OUT BEHIND OUR INNOCENT BACKS, ALLIE...SHAME, SHAME! LOL! Very nicework eau amor, non? oui!
Beautiful and sensuous.
I liked the evocative rythym in this poem Alison. Could feel the waves.
I get the picture, and like it tres much...
I read through enjoying the steady rhythm and imagery and reach the end feeling seduced. I think you accomplished what you set out to do with this one. Great poem! ! !