Tuesday, August 29, 2006

Temptation Comments

Rating: 5.0
Alone in the darkness my true fate lies
Where evil rules and hatred never dies
The trick he uses is sweet temptation
But the price to pay is eternal damnation


Evy Moore
Nicole Kelley 12 September 2006
Evy, this is a and you have alot in common...keep on writing....
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Leo Lopes 11 September 2006
Another cool poem if i may say so myself ;) 'Alone in the darkness my true fate lies where evil rules and hatred never dies' I can see you think similar to me ...And you know what they say.......... Great minds think alike
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Daniel Nairn 11 September 2006
One of your best poems, definitely...
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Patricia Gale 11 September 2006
Fantastic lines... the venom.. evil rules and heatred never dies..... such deep from so few words.
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David Gerardino 11 September 2006
He gave me the venom and gave me the knife, great line..............
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Dee Daffodil 11 September 2006
Get thee behind me Satan...and push.... You certainly have a way with words, this one is dark and moody. Seems to be a common theme here. Dee
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