Tempted Poem by David Harris

Tempted

Rating: 4.6


I walk down the street
A pretty woman passes
I stop, turn and stare.
Her bottom wiggles
Oooh, I’m tempted
Then my conscience kicks in
To remind me that
I have a wife, three kids and a cat

30 Jan 2007

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Melvina Germain 01 February 2007

Ahhh that's sweet, well at least you're tempted and that's as far as it goes. I think this is quite normal, shows your still alive and well. I've been known to take a peak at those beautiful, pert bums, then a smile comes across my face, maybe a little chuckle as I walk by the gent. My husband liked to look at the pretty girls and I'll say it again, I liked and still like those georgeous bums. Enough said, wonderful poem David. a big (10) --Melvina

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Francesca Johnson 01 February 2007

There's an old saying, David. Just because you have ordered your meal doesn't mean you can't look at the menu... And like Melvina says, there's no harm in it and shows you're still alive. I laughed at the very end line '....and a cat'....? Love, Fran xxx

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Linda Ori 25 February 2007

You're never too old to look! A friend once said, 'I don't care where you do your shopping, but do your buying at home! '. That has always stuck with me. Fun read, David - thanks! Linda :) :) :)

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 11 March 2007

Look but oh dont touch... the cat would be devasted...David 10

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Theodora Onken 11 April 2007

Oh but thank goodness for conscience! We're all tempted at times, but it is our conscience that keeps us in place. Loved the poem as usual, Theo

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Mizzy ........ 10 September 2016

Those shapely bottoms are the main cause of procreation......nicely written poem!

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Babatunde Aremu 10 September 2016

A real life experience that men goes through daily. However, most only end in tempations only the weak is ensnared. Great work!

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Anil Kumar Panda 10 September 2016

Very nice. You obeyed call of your conscience that is nice. Loved it.

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Clarence Prince 10 September 2016

Good for you, your conscience lives!

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 10 September 2016

Her bottom wiggles Oooh, I’m tempted Then my conscience kicks in To remind me that I have a wife, three kids and a cat It's a great little poem presenting male psychology. Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem.10 for it. Subhas

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