Mahfooz Ali
Lucknow (U.P.) India
Sunday, May 21, 2006

Thank You, Father Comments

Rating: 4.8
Fathers hold you when you have bad dreams
And they comfort you when all is lost it seems.
Fathers teach you to dribble a basketball and shoot a free throw
And they lead you as you grow.

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Mahfooz Ali
COMMENTS
Abhimanyu Kumar.s 22 November 2017
Beautiful verses on fathers. Indeed they encourage you for everything.
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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 12 October 2015
Verily, father's love is the second greatest love on earth, fathers are a great source of assistance to their children. Loved reading it...........10
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Akhtar Jawad 24 January 2015
A nice gratitude to fathers..................10
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Key'aira Johnson 04 March 2012
I loved it, just beautiful
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Amber Marie 11 September 2011
OH! this touched my heart deeply! How this is so ture baout dds who actually care! I love simplythe way you put the words. I really do :)
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Jordan Giveans 18 June 2010
i loved this poem. it reminds me of my dad! ! ! i feel like crying
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Katie Holmes 06 March 2010
this poem is beautiful and moving. I love it, and it is so true! ! it tells how a good father is and some of the things a loving father will do. This is exquisite.
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Rosa Banks 29 November 2009
That sounds nice well if your dad did that then he was a good dad i wish my dad were still here to help me like your dad did but what can i do? still good job!
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Rosa Banks 29 November 2009
That sounds nice well if your dad did that then he was a good dad i wish my dad were still here to help me like your dad did but what can i do? still good job!
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Neha Aradhye 20 June 2009
lovely, i must say & also very true... :) keep it work & all the very best... ;)
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foxy babii 13 June 2008
wow thats awesome poem it has touched me
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Mansi Sharma 11 May 2008
wow! ! really a Nice poem: -) awesome use of imagery! ! i could actually picturize the whole poem...great work! ! !
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MCKENZi : ] 18 February 2008
reminds me so much of my daddy. i love him soo much! it must be hard to be a dad, not that i would know, but he does such a great job! great poem by the way : ]
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Amber Ross 26 July 2007
i loved your poem, it was awsome keep writing please...
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JESSiCA .k 28 June 2007
i liked your poem, i wish i would have that opportunity with my dad.
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Analisssa Range 12 December 2006
Oh my God i love this poem! i think im going to use it in my dads Christmas card if thats alright with you
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Aisha Sherazi 22 May 2006
Soooooooooo lovely, you have made me miss my father more than I usually do! Nice poem Mahfooz. Peace, Aisha
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