That Time In 2019 Poem by Arb Rudi

That Time In 2019

Rating: 5.0


That time in 2019...

When hell had struck
upon my life,
the loss of two angels
had never crossed my mind.

There was a dying wish
on their beloved faces,
which I failed to retrive
while I was stuck in fear.

Time passed slowly
as they were going underneath.
My happiness was lost,
once I realized it was all real.

Tuesday, September 22, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: death,depression,expression,melancholic,sadness
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I wrote this poem when I attended my first funerals and damn I don't wanna visit a graveyard again...The thought of losing the one you love is excruciating.

Copyright © Arb Rudi
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ejalonibu Abraham 24 September 2020

Hello a great poet you are very good keep it up

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Lure Pot 19 October 2020

Beautifully written, Poet!

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Jazib Kamalvi 08 October 2020

Write comment. Such a nice poem, Arb. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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Terry Craddock 04 October 2020

'Time passed slowly' Some good lines, I have a question, with regard to the seriousness of the topic, what do you really want to say? Write that, write well. Some nice lines, the question is do you want to express more?

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Arb Rudi 07 October 2020

Basically I'm trying to live with the fact that some people died and I cannot make sense of it as to why? or how did they die? . I cannot believe it honestly, but life goes on and this is just another bump on the road.

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Dr Antony Theodore 02 October 2020

Time passed slowly as they were going underneath. My happiness was lost, once I realized it was all real. a fine poem revealing depression. tony

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Alexie Whitman 28 September 2020

You are such an incredible poet. I just want to say never ever stop writing.

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Arb Rudi 02 October 2020

Delighted to hear that!

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