emma hannon

Rookie (28-3-1995 / sligo)

The Beauty Of Him - Poem by emma hannon

The temptation to kiss thee,
is stronger than my will to stay away from thou,
my heart aches for thee so much it hurts like a jab of a needle.
The blood pure and rich,
the taste a warm sensation,
the feeling thy gets when i thinkest of thee.


Your eyes so sweet and innocent,
your smile so full of good,
i picture thee by my side,
but this only be a dream.


Thou walks with such a grace,
and i can't help but notice the beauty of thou's face,
so young and pure,
makest thee want thou all the more.


Comments about The Beauty Of Him by emma hannon

  • (12/30/2009 1:49:00 PM)


    Good write. Most people fare very poorly in using language that is not in current usage. You have been reading. Keep reading and writing. Good luck. (Report) Reply

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  • (12/26/2009 5:35:00 AM)


    Considering you're only 14 Em, I think you've written it really well :)
    Your use of archaic language DOES work well, despite needing tweaking slightly.
    I really enjoyed reading your poem - keep writing, you clearly love it.
    Well done: D
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  • (12/22/2009 7:37:00 PM)


    I agree with Jake man, if you want to give the girl advice send her a message (Report) Reply

  • (12/21/2009 12:15:00 PM)


    Hey Ronald..don't write an essay about it. It's Emma's best poem...Love it, Emma. (Report) Reply

  • (12/20/2009 6:54:00 PM)


    If Its A Dream Dat You Longin For..
    Let's Brings It To Reality..
    Don't Give Up Of What You Want..
    You'd Never Know If You Never Tried=]

    Good Poem By The Way^^
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  • (12/20/2009 1:00:00 PM)


    Wow, I really like the way you wrote this. And I understand how you feel. Cool poem. (Report) Reply

  • (12/20/2009 12:56:00 PM)


    aww your some one u know? (Report) Reply

  • (12/20/2009 12:48:00 PM)


    O dear...true love, you should get married if u are both single. Rare thing..true love. (Report) Reply

  • (12/20/2009 9:09:00 AM)


    May your yearnings for your love be personified by thou on love. A very lovely poem. Good writing, keep up the good work. Your friend Lynn (Report) Reply

  • Aastha Uppal (12/19/2009 4:11:00 PM)


    a flattering poem! ! ! ! will enchant the person forever......great one (Report) Reply

  • Ramesh T A (12/19/2009 2:59:00 PM)


    Poem as sweet as kiss will have its dream come true soon! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, December 19, 2009



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