Waseem A Malla

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The Cruel Mistress: Life - Poem by Waseem A Malla

I think of you as a cruel mistress,
Landed I'm in utter distress,
This insanity, no wine can bring,
This pain in my heart, no bee can sting,
Those who think of you as a pleasure,
And call you a heavenly treasure,
Have never had me in their sight,
Only pain you inflict, and no delight…

Poet's Notes about The Poem

The poet thinks of life as a cruel mistress, and justifies the reasons in a few lines of short verse. The rhyming pattern is 'aabb'. Hope readers will enjoy and comment.

Comments about The Cruel Mistress: Life by Waseem A Malla

  • Nurain Ali-balogun (12/31/2012 6:03:00 AM)

    You really captured so much of life in its true sense in this poem. While life is viewed as a sweet, lovely thing, which it can be, it can also be an unimaginably cruel spouse which one can not divorce and re-marry elsewhere. (Report) Reply

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  • Tiger Lily Love (12/22/2012 10:19:00 PM)

    I enjoyed this poem. Many paint the picture that is life as something great and it is, but not all the time. Its refreshing to see someone point out the cruel side that life often has. Great write! (Report) Reply

  • S.zaynab Kamoonpuri (12/22/2012 7:04:00 AM)

    Even negativity is delightful if u can rhyme it so fabulously. D simile of life to cruel miss is expresd nicely here. Kudos. (Report) Reply

  • Shahzia Batool (12/12/2012 8:58:00 AM)

    Strict one-sided opinion about life though...but it's your right...the poem is a good composition... (Report) Reply

  • Neetha Sasidharan (12/11/2012 9:23:00 AM)

    grt rhymes..dude....nice imaginations tooo...thnx 4 d note....kp penning (Report) Reply

  • (12/5/2012 6:26:00 AM)

    Few lines but but deep intensity relecting on them.Good one. (Report) Reply

  • (12/3/2012 1:23:00 PM)

    woow i must confess i agree 100% with this poem about life i have written a lot of poems i dont remeber them by heart though and i dont have them on me right now but i will most deffinatly post a few tomowrrow (Report) Reply

  • Angel Plant (12/3/2012 8:20:00 AM)

    That is nice. I love it. I will read more. (Report) Reply

  • (11/30/2012 12:50:00 PM)

    another inspired great poem (Report) Reply

  • (11/29/2012 2:51:00 PM)

    You've skillfully managed to capture such intense emotion in just a few lines. Bravo! Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Hazel Durham (11/18/2012 8:11:00 AM)

    Great write with lovely rhythm and flow, Inspired write! ! (Report) Reply

  • April Swan (my Diary Of Bitterweet Chocolate) (11/16/2012 1:14:00 PM)

    this poem is dark, but buetifal. funny thats how I picture the mistress. :) I liked it. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, May 23, 2012

Poem Edited: Monday, December 3, 2012

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