Wednesday, July 9, 2008

***the Day My Baby Brother Died*** Comments

Rating: 2.9
I remember that dreadful morning,
Waking to the beast,
Time had stopped, the news reckless
A beautiful boy amazing but deceased


Daniel Richards
* Sunprincess * 09 August 2015
...heartfelt, very touching, sorry for your loss, losing a family member is especially difficult ?
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Heather Wilkins 28 August 2013
a very emotional write touching the heart. sorry about your loss good write
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Bethany Smith 10 February 2012
this poem...dwamn it touched my heart deep. my little baby brother Zaiden Alxander Young was born 2 days ago on the 9th a long with his twin LeRoy. Zaiden died early this morning and LeRoy is barely hanging on... [/3
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Sally Plumb Plumb 10 March 2010
This is so very upsetting.Bless you. Try 'Song Of A Dying Infant'.
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Haven Fulford 20 May 2009
im sorry to hear about your brother i have a 1 yr old brother and he is the sweetest thing ever. i wouldnt know what to do if i lost him. your poem is so sad
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Patti Masterman 10 February 2009
Perhaps you did hold him and guilt blocked the memory later. Or maybe you were just trying to protect yourself. I've found that most of the strange stories around a death somehow involved the bereaved trying to protect themselves. We cannot gauge the depth of pain another human being is capable of experiencing; so we must forgive their occasional weakness because it might be necessary for their survival.
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