can't believe i didn't notice
that we were both drawing apart,
i'd always thought that i would love you
from the bottom of my heart.
oh i absolutly love this poem graet job please let me know when you wright more i would love to read your new work
Ppl say goodbye every second scary that the next second mite b ur turn LOVE IT! ! ! 10+++
I think that love is good when you have it. Maybe because you have forgotten that you are ready for a new. Take your life lessons and keep them close to your heart. Never give up and you will find your true happiness.
Good write, sometimes things don't turn out as we hope, keep writing.
Lynda xx 10
great poem! very powerfull
wow! I felt a lot of emotion in that, well done Londiwe, brilliant xx
I really like this poem. I believe this happens to alot of people, but you just have to see if your relationship is Fire_Proof!
very to the point fine writing very real but also sad but also true
A sad and sensitive piece, as yours so often are. Have you thought about putting more of this in rhyme? Might help you establish the mood even better.
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