beauty of the ocean had gone bywind swiped it dreadfullynothing was there under the sea bed................................................
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She has found true love in the eyes of love, despite his financial status-for 'money cannot buy love'. Nice one.
a new set of eyes you created for me as love in this sense I now look in at a new perspective now great work well done 10/10
i love that poem it's really good! ! ! 10+++ hope to see more
a naive love poem. shan
wow! ! !
I beleive you have hir the nail square on the head, and drove it home with just one blow.
keep on sharing lady Grace
This is a good poem.
I like the theme behind it but the only thing i would say is the rhythm seems off at times but still a good poem.
I really like this one, keep writing :)
Quads have been very good to you very nice this is a good one! ! !
Thanks for sharing
have a blessed day
love is prosperious in it`s worth, wayward winds of time wipe it`s glories, what so ever, the stability of fragile love lies in the fist of loving hearts
a profoundly written, a true dedication to a beloved. Nothing negative on this piece of work, lines are in deep thoughts, full of emotions and wisely said. However, what I believe that the eyes of love couldn't see, it's blind, isn't it? Thanks
The eyes of love
are full of warmth
it caresses you
with hands invisible
fills you with life
and energy in strife
it sends you messages
fuelled with urge to strive.
he wore nothing on his lips
except a beautiful smile... Wonderful. Great. Yes true love never looks for wealth, position, assets etc. Kudos.
Hi, it's indeed true, we don't need anything to be happy... because happiness is about feeling not about something :) great work!
Very beautiful, As I read - I can see. and feel.
happiness is always with feelings of heart and mind ''''
Vert True, Love is like that only, if it can be bought through anything else then, it is no love at all, Love is just Love
And this is the eye of love.i'm happy that there is someone who understand the real meaning of love.
this is truly a beautiful poem.. it reminds me of the movie tristan and isolde.. im usually not one for love poems but this really is an amazing poem.
I love it. It's true and it feels so straight from the heart. It makes you think about what love really is. Beautiful.
That is so true. I liked it alot.