A fairy tale look at the love of Radha beautifully portrayed with the backdropp of the universe to inspire the reader which it did handsomely...regards
felt like reading a fantasy tale and it was slowly unfolding in front of my eyes..u paint with ur words, , , the stars trying to imitate the glitter in her eyes and failing to do so...wow..awe inspiring piece
Exquisite. Eloquently penned in an informative, teaching yet 'fairytale' format.
What extensive knowledge you have of this touching story about eternal love. Love the use of metaphors.
‘To fly with you wantonly around the whole world’…wantonly … without motivation or provocation…unidirectional/unconditional Love…
Finest metaphors… >>>>
Painted by the airy brushes on the cloudy canvass/Illuminated by the heavenly hue of the setting sun/Shrouded by the glossy halo around’…’ Matchless…. Thanks for sharing
Ms. Nivedita
UK
10/10
Once again, you have touched my heart and brought tears to my eyes. Thank you for posting another one. I truly long for Krishna. It's been far too long and I'd give anything to be with him, forever.
In honour of love, jade, you and, of course, Krishna, I give my most heartfelt thanks and deepest appreciation.
Cannot wait to read another....
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