Friday, March 9, 2012

The Lacerated Diary Comments

Rating: 2.8
Bookends almost adjoining, now
For all that's not of florid inditement,
Are words unwritten sulphurously


Matthew Pratt
Abby Whaley 17 March 2012
Lovely poem Matthew!
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Ency Bearis 15 March 2012
Remarkable poem Matthew, well versed. Keep up the good write.
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Annabel Cruz 12 March 2012
Love the line winter smitten land and your use of alliteration path of pages! Nicely done! However, I'm an English teacher so I have some advice about your word usage (poetic license aside) : there is no adverb form of sulphorous, the collocation for imbued is with, not on and there is no such word as inditement, did you mean indictment? This is constructive criticism so I hope it does not offend is well meaning.
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Unwritten Soul 12 March 2012
I have nothing to say other that an awesome writing, it was a good one speaks for you If a diary can express your days and it really left reader with heartfelt read :) but a bit scary too hahahaha_Unwritten Soul
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Wahab Abdul 11 March 2012
wow! a great poem! i like it, well crafted and well composed...a great write.....i like it. please read my new poems.
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Silentpoet Grl 11 March 2012
.... i like this!
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Luz Hanaii 11 March 2012
Paints a sad picture, deep and concise.
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Valerie Dohren 11 March 2012
Very good write Matthew.
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