Wednesday, July 1, 2009

The Legend Of Poemhunter (Ahmad Shiddiqi) Comments

Rating: 4.2
your sun won't descend
from now till the end
come on great poet
teach us poetry

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omar ibrahim
COMMENTS
Derek Haughton 09 December 2011
A good tribute, I liked the opening rhymed couplet and the repeat of the device at the end but think a little more work is needed.
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Minnie Gehrig 17 August 2010
beautifull this write has alot of soul!
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Frank Odindo 14 August 2010
nice poem Ibrahim, I give you a ten on this one.
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Marina Gasbey 03 August 2010
Beautiful tribute... Your words intoned a sort of mesmerizing chant. Wonderful work, Thanks :) ... Marina
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Dr.subhendu Kar 25 July 2010
raise your voice and let's sing together O fallen leaf, O fallen feather! ....................l est mankind may resurge from ruin entwined voices may glorify fallen.........wonderful write of tribute to the poet,1o++, thanks for sharing
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Indeed a great poetry but one can expose not impose in creative pursuits… In my knowledge [I beg your excuse] poetry is matter of inside of poet where no one can enter … Voted 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK
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Lynn Glover 21 January 2010
A great tribute to Ahmad, a friend of mine here at poemhunter. A very meaningful poem to your dear friend and poet. A very good write. Your friend Lynn
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Krazy Rae 30 October 2009
very unique I enjoyed it
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Moriah Reyes 23 October 2009
: ( Even though i didnt know who you were talking about, I still liked this poem! ! It reads very well....has i kind of flow and melody to it.
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Indira Renganathan 10 October 2009
Yes, Ahmad deserves lot more tribute from more poets specially for his voracious reading and wide knowledge....I join you with my salutes to Ahmad
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Obinna Eruchie 09 October 2009
Passionate melodious tribute to a wonderful friend in PH.
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saltedpeanut blank 05 September 2009
I too have that passion for music and know how it feels to play a piece that means more to you than just the ink on the paper, good job
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Joseph Poewhit 29 August 2009
Ahmads passion for music reflects in his poetry.
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Patti Masterman 26 August 2009
'raise your voice and let's sing together O fallen leaf, O fallen feather! '- it is for lines such as this that I have weathered many a storm in the search..fine writing.
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Jen Capaldi 25 August 2009
Omar, It is quite apparent that your homage to your greatly admired poet friend has not only touched his heart but all of ours as well. i (and many others i am sure) could only dream that one day somene would see us in the same light and pay homage to us that way. kudos my poet friend. another great work! Jen
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Aldo Kraas 24 August 2009
Thanks for sharing your poem
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Almedia Knight-Oliver 24 August 2009
This is a poem of praise to a great poet of poetry (I read and commented on 'A blissful') Wish' that the 'sun wont decend on from now to the end'.Your poem praise his teaching us poetry; an aria teaching us songs of poetry' telling tales of Indonesis, and 'lessons of life's fate, forgivness and happiness.' through this poem, I've meet another poet friend-again thanks for sharing this well deserved 10+++ poem
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Niken Kusuma Wardani 13 July 2009
Hi Omar, The poem & the legend, match each other perfectly! !
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Angelica Ayman 11 July 2009
great poem, great expresions, great rhymes, great idea, everything in that poem is wonderful well written 10++++! ! ! !
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Zeinab Sherif 08 July 2009
i like ur way of expressing &talking about subjects &it's good 2 speak about ur friend.10+++&this poem deserves more, thanks.
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