Shyana Keajls

The Mirror

She stares at herself in the mirror,
Unaware of what is truely inside.
Her vision has never been clearer.
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  • Noel Horlanda (4/9/2009 8:32:00 AM)

    mirror, mirror who is the fairest of them all? I remember that. A couple of lines at the beginning has rough rhymes but in the next following lines it went smoothly, good flow yah know? I still consider it excellent.

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  • Charlotte Andreski (4/7/2009 4:38:00 PM)

    Shy,
    (Yeah, I'm shortening your name because I won't get used to the full one for a while)
    I think that you should be whatever you want to be.
    Wash away the make-up, love
    Because you really don't need it.
    But give me some of this strength,
    Because after what He's done to you
    and what He's done to me,
    I think we're just stronger after all (:

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  • Billie Baldwin (4/7/2009 1:44:00 PM)

    Greeting!

    The mirror is when you look at yourself and
    see yourself for what God created you to be,
    Free to be whatever you want to be.

    Blessing!

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